Corstorphine Building Society

Corstorphine Building Society has six documents and none is executed. Two final proposals price Enterprise at £125k a year, and the draft MSA of 24 Sep 2026 says the order form is not yet issued. Price, term and service levels are not contracted.

Executed: no document has a stored status of executed, so every contracted term is null. The six documents are three marked final and three marked draft, and the roll-up covers all six.

Open items: the draft Master Services Agreement of 24 Sep 2026 is the latest document. Tom Ashdown prepared it and Catriona Muir reviewed it; it is unsigned and states no price, availability or response figures.

That MSA leaves the liability cap, the audit notice period and the exit plan contents open. It records the Enterprise order form as not yet issued.

Proposals: the final proposal of 5 May 2026 prices Enterprise at £125k per year plus a one-off £30k implementation. The final proposal of 12 May 2026 gives £125k a year and a total deal value of £155k.

The draft proposal of 7 May 2026 uses the same £125k and £155k figures. The £155k is first-year subscription plus implementation and is not an annual figure.

Security: the final questionnaire of 9 Apr 2026 by Theo Gallagher commits nothing and has four open points. The later draft of 9 Jun 2026 by Hannah Lowe, addressed to Euan Rattray, has many answers marked as evidence to follow.

Contradictions:

• Nightly refresh: the 12 May 2026 proposal says 07:00 UK time, but the 9 Jun 2026 draft questionnaire says 07:00 customer local time.
• P1 response: the 5 May 2026 proposal states thirty minutes, but the 12 May 2026 proposal gives no figure.
• Implementation: the 5 May 2026 proposal itemises £30k, but the 12 May 2026 proposal folds it into £155k.
• Two documents marked final share one title and file name, dated 5 May 2026 and 12 May 2026.

The 5 May 2026 proposal is also inconsistent within itself on the refresh time zone. It uses UK time in one place and customer local time in another.

Commitments: no live obligations exist, because nothing is executed. Every document defers price, term and service levels to an order form.

Gaps: the documents do not show any order form, signature, start date or renewal date. They also do not show which of the two final proposals the Society is working from, and no availability percentage appears anywhere.

AI · claude-opus-5-5 · as at Fri 9 Oct 2026