What the paper says
Document roll-up
Current to 12 Oct 26Aldbourne Hospice Care has two Starter proposals from Sophie Ling: a draft dated 29 Apr 2026 and a final dated 5 May 2026. No order form is held, so no price or terms are contracted, and the two proposals word the P1 response differently.
Executed: No document for Aldbourne Hospice Care has the stored status executed, so no price, term or service level is contracted. Both documents read are proposals and bind neither party.
Open items: The draft proposal v1 of 29 Apr 2026 quotes £22k for the Year 1 subscription plus £6,000 implementation, £28k in total. The final proposal of 5 May 2026 quotes £28k for the first year and £22k a year from year two.
The final proposal does not break down its first-year figure. It also states that the subscription may be cancelled with 30 days' notice and that prices exclude VAT.
Contradictions: The draft of 29 Apr 2026 states a "four-hour" P1 response without saying business hours. The final of 5 May 2026 states a 4 business-hour P1 response, which is the Starter standard.
The draft commits that connectors will be live within 30 days; the read of the final proposal does not record that commitment. The final adds service credits for availability shortfalls and the 30-day cancellation clause, which the read of the draft does not record.
Commitments: None are live, because nothing is executed. If an order form follows, it should take its P1 wording and connector commitment from the final proposal, not the draft.
Gaps: The roll-up covers both documents held, and both were read. The records do not show whether either proposal was accepted, who would sign, or any start, end or renewal date.
Executed terms
Current to 9 Oct 26- Billingnot recorded
- Endnot recorded
- Pricenot recorded
- Service levels[]
- Startnot recorded
- Term monthsnot recorded
Documents
Updated 9 Oct 26- presales
Folders and documents as a list
- Proposals (2)
- Starter tier proposal, draft v1 draft · proposal · 29 Apr 2026
- Starter tier proposal issued · proposal · 5 May 2026
Contradictions
Current to 9 Oct 26| Document | Against | What differs |
|---|---|---|
| Aldbourne Hospice Care - Proposal v1 | Aldbourne Hospice Care - Proposal | P1 response: the draft of 29 Apr 2026 says four-hour without business hours; the final of 5 May 2026 says 4 business-hour. |
| Aldbourne Hospice Care - Proposal v1 | Aldbourne Hospice Care - Proposal | Scope: the draft commits connectors live within 30 days; the read of the final does not record it, but adds service credits and a 30 days' notice cancellation clause. |
| Aldbourne Hospice Care - Proposal v1 | Aldbourne Hospice Care - Proposal | Price wording: the draft splits £22,000 subscription and £6,000 implementation; the final states £28,000 for the first year without a breakdown. |