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On 10 Oct 2023 Owen Tallis agreed quarterly billing in arrears and a one-off discount on implementation, for the first term only. Derek Imrie confirmed renewal is at list. A revised order form was to follow.

What was said

What this says

Current to 11 Oct 26

On 10 Oct 2023 Owen Tallis agreed quarterly billing in arrears and a one-off discount on implementation, for the first term only. Derek Imrie confirmed renewal is at list. A revised order form was to follow.

What happened: Pamela Lyall asked for quarterly billing because of cash flow. Owen offered quarterly in arrears and, on Derek's price push, took a thousand off the six thousand implementation.

Customer view: Derek checked that year one carries the discount and year two renews at standard list. The customer is price and cash flow sensitive, not questioning the product.

Commercial: The term is one year, auto-renewing unless either side gives 90 days' notice. Starter terms were confirmed as 15 users, 4 connectors, 99.5% availability with a 5% credit, and four business hours first response.

Watch: The discount ends at renewal, so the first renewal is a price step for a cost-conscious buyer. The evidence does not show the order form being signed.

AI · claude-sonnet-5-5 · 11 Oct 2026

Themes

Current to 9 Oct 26
Theme
Price, billing and renewal terms
Importance
renewal
Sentiment
positive
Voice
decision-maker

Who was there

BB-Demo

Them

Follow-up

Next steps

Current to 9 Oct 26
  • Tom Ashdown to send the revised order form with the discount and quarterly billing that evening.
  • Derek Imrie and Pamela Lyall to review and sign the order form.
  • Tom to kick off implementation once signed, probably early November.

Risks

Current to 9 Oct 26
  • The first-term discount ends at renewal, so the customer faces a list-price step at the first renewal.
  • Quarterly in arrears is a non-standard billing term that must be reflected correctly in the order form.
  • Customer is cash flow sensitive, so invoice timing errors would land badly.

Opportunities

Current to 9 Oct 26
  • Lorna asked about more users or connectors, so a Starter upgrade or add-on is a possible later conversation.
  • Quarterly billing removed the main cash flow objection and unblocked signature.

Transcript

  1. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown None
    Right, everyone here? I've got Owen with me, he's our VP Sales, because you've had a few questions on the commercial side.
  2. Derek Imrie
    Derek Imrie None
    Yeah, Pamela sent some queries. Pamela's here as well to help me think through the contract.
  3. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    Good, good. Where's the friction?
  4. Pamela Lyall
    Pamela Lyall None
    The annual renewal, can we do quarterly billing instead?
  5. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    We can, but that usually comes with a 5% uplift. What's driving that?
  6. Pamela Lyall
    Pamela Lyall None
    Cash flow, mainly. Annual feels like a big lump sum at once.
  7. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    Fair. What if we do quarterly in arrears? You'd pay at the end of each quarter. That spreads the cash flow without the admin overhead.
  8. Pamela Lyall
    Pamela Lyall None
    That works better for us.
  9. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    Good. What else?
  10. Derek Imrie
    Derek Imrie None
    Price. Tom quoted twenty-five and a half, but I'd like to understand if that's flexible.
  11. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    Where are you thinking?
  12. Derek Imrie
    Derek Imrie None
    Well, I've done a bit of homework. Your implementation is six thousand but our work on the back end, getting systems ready, data clean, that's probably a thousand's worth on our side. Would you come down a bit on that?
  13. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    I appreciate that. The honest answer is the six is where we need to be. But here's what I'll offer: if you commit to the first year now, I can discount the implementation by a thousand. So you'd pay five thousand instead of six, subscription's nineteen thousand five hundred, total first year is twenty-four thousand five hundred.
  14. Derek Imrie
    Derek Imrie None
    That's helpful. And that's it for discounts on the first year?
  15. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    That's it. After year one, pricing renews at the list rate, no discount on renewals. But for the first term, that's what we can do.
  16. Derek Imrie
    Derek Imrie None
    Okay, so year one is twenty-four thousand five hundred, and then we renew at the standard list on year two?
  17. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    That's right. And just to be clear, that discount is good for the first term only.
  18. Lorna Wishart
    Lorna Wishart None
    What happens if we want more users or more connectors down the line?
  19. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown None
    You'd talk to me. Starter comes with 15 users and 4 connectors. If you need more, we can add them. Upgrades are usually pro-rated.
  20. Derek Imrie
    Derek Imrie None
    And the contract, what's the term?
  21. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    One year, auto-renews unless either of us give 90 days' notice.
  22. Pamela Lyall
    Pamela Lyall None
    What about service levels? Uptime, response times?
  23. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown None
    With Starter, 99.5% availability. If we drop below that, you get 5% of a month's fee as a credit.
  24. Pamela Lyall
    Pamela Lyall None
    And if a ticket comes in, how fast?
  25. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    First response is four business hours. That's the SLA for Starter.
  26. Derek Imrie
    Derek Imrie None
    Okay. I think we're getting close. What's the next step?
  27. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    Tom'll send you a revised order form reflecting the discount and quarterly billing. You review, sign, and we're away.
  28. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown None
    I'll get that over tonight. Once it's signed, we kick off, probably early November.
  29. Derek Imrie
    Derek Imrie None
    Good. I think we're done here. Cheers, Tom, Owen.
  30. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis None
    Thanks, Derek. Speak soon.

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